(shot)- Guys in the van, a short shot of there hands about to open the door,audience is given idea that something bad's going to happen.
(1sec shot)-
A close up of Shadei's face for just less than a second,more of a flicker of her face rather than an actual 1 second shot. This will help to create a sense of fright as it is going to be such a quick shot.
(1sec shot)- Guys jump out of van, (maybe this could be a tracking shot) grab Shadei and struggle to keep her quite while getting her back into the van as she is fighting them of.Shadei: "Velaaaam Kon!Naaaa!Velam Konid!Komak!HELP HELP!" (speaks in foreign language, when she shouts "help"- she says it with an Iranian accent.)(while Shadei is shouting, the camera could slowly drift of towards the van driver, and then slowly drift back, but we still hear her voice in the background.)
Van driver: "Shut the fuck up! Shut her up Ted!" (Ted is a temporary name for one of the guys.)Ted- 'Ted slaps Shadei' Ted: "Shut the fuck up!"Shadei is crying as she tries to hit back but Ted grabs her arm and forcefully gets her in the van.
NEXT SCENE-LOCATION:(van)-Ted's hand is covering Shadei's mouth, but we still see her attempting to scream. Guy (2) passes rope to ted. Guy (3) holds Shadei as Guy (2) and Ted try to wrap the rope around Shadei's mouth to stop her from screaming.Ted: "Get me something to cover her fucking face! Now!"A conversation between van driver and Guy (3), saying to move location.I haven't decided the exact conversation. Car screeches to new location. Short shots of girl/van driver etc.
(2secs)-A short shot of Ted getting tools ready. Shadei hits Ted and hurts him. Ted grabs Shadei's face, forcefully squeezing both her cheeks with one hand, really hard and then tries to lick her cheek.They come to a sudden stop, get out the car.
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